Very awesome! It looks amazing!

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Lt. Maria Laguerta: So then he must have already had the head with him in the front seat. Huh, that's weird. Why would he keep it there?
Dexter Morgan: I don't know. So he could use a carpool lane.

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This is cool. You are awesome at faces. Their hair is also really neat-looking. And I like the composition.

Aaaaaand crits:

Well, your anatomy is off. Most noticably for me is that their torsos are too long/arms and legs too short. Arms should come down to their mid-thigh, and neither character would have that if they were standing up with their arms at their sides. Their wrists are funny too, but I'm not really sure how.

Also, some of the folds don't seem to follow. Particularly the ruffles on the ends of the skirts. When you're drawing clothes, try to envision how they're working around the body. Draw the body first and all that jazz. (I can't see your pencil well enough to tell if you did that or not).

I guess the last thing would be that the left half needs something in the foreground to give it some depth so it can better match the right. I know you were trying to make everything neat and organized, but something on the floor would have helped a lot. (Like a mat or a briefcase or something.)

Opera is lagging, wtf opera?

Harhar. I feel like a jerk giving you all of these crits. I almost never check the critique encouraged box. I CAN DISH IT OUT, BUT I CANNAE TAKE IT, EH? (No, I just never upload things that I can get helpful crits on. STOP DRAWING SIMPLIFIED THINGS, CATH. DRAW MOAR PEOPLE. THAT ARE ACCURATE.)

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Don't eat the ones that defy physics. You'll get indigestion.

This is wonderful
and an excellent following from the previous segmant

Well done and good luck

znow-white ~ collab-dA

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Thank you! I can't wait to see the others

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Yes, I know how long arms should be, trust me XD And my anatomy is definitely imperfect. But I'm workiiing

Also with the clothes, I do always draw the body first. Still practicing folds, as they're tricky. The skirt I actually didn't even attempt accuracy on XD So you caught that one.

I like assymetry >.> Call it a flaw XD

Opera? ... Um. What?

Haha, don't feel like a jerrrk. Nobody else ever critiques D:

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Opera is my browser. >_>

And I meant balance, not symmetry. I seriously think that side needs something to show depth. XD;;;

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Don't eat the ones that defy physics. You'll get indigestion.

Balance and symmetry go hand in hand in a two-dimensional world XD
I get what you mean, though, but I still disagree. I think the imbalance adds to the underlying purpose. Sort of like the one on the left is full profile with the wall, and the one on the right is slightly tilted. I stand by my descision XD

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